same thing with the eyelashes it doesnt look natural. try making the eyebrows a dark blonde or a brown. also, black eyebrows do not match with blonde hair. i don’t know if this is something you’d want to keep in mind, but since you’re trying to make a model of a utau, i’d recommend not basing her appearance off of an already preexisting character. Not to mention, the head, hair, and other features look a lot like the lenka tda models that are already out there. it looks much neater and less blocky and unnatural. Instead of splitting a material to make a different hair color, i would rather recommend editing the texture itself. there are plenty of tutorials on deviantart to learn how to clean your models, and there are even checklists available to make sure you have exactly what you need done before releasing a model for public use. )įirstly, i want to say that before releasing any mmd model or edit, please please please PLEASE clean it up first!! from what i can see here, there are extra, unused bones, physics everywhere, and the display panel is an absolute mess. ( i will be analyzing the ‘default’ model in this model pack that you’ve provided. Remember to follow the rules, credit me and the others mentioned above, and be sure to tell me if I've missed any credits or need to fix something.Could you please critique this model? I kinda updated her, so ummm, I don’t know what to say… redistribution of parts on a full model and credit usage of model for gore, r-18, fetish art, etc usage of model for commercial, political, religious use Onto the credits and then rules:īases: natsumy-paradise, celestcsilvari, TDA, and me for the editing All in all, I'd say it's a pretty diverse cast of bodies. The rigging should be fine, as should the physics, but it tends to mess up with the plus size base. I added one more instead of there only being 5, because I wanted it to be an even number and it freaked me out otherwise. Pear shape(morph for larger breasts, does that technically make it an hour glass? or aren't hour glasses measured by how small your waist is compared to your bust and hips? erm. Feminine plus size(ill eventually post a version for men but for now you can use this) Regardless! The bases are, in order of the photo: Totally not because I'm graduating in a couple months and have to give this computer back to my school.

Even though it doesn't warrant this, I like to give out things so you get these bases. Anyway! I've hit 300 watchers which is a lot in my mind. Can you tell I had no idea what to do with the preview? because I did.

Textures shown are not included! they're available here: See, this time I actually kept my promise and released the bases instead of letting them rot.

Mmd best tda base